“ In this grand pattern of things you receive an A just for effort and hard work. Where you actually confused us was first on the facts. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate here. Having said that, let me say to you precisely what did deliver the results. The writing is certainly highly convincing which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can easily notice the leaps in reasoning you make, I am not convinced of how you appear to connect your details which make your conclusion. For now I will yield to your issue but trust in the near future you connect your dots better. ”